Pariah oF Never

Thank you, Dreamy. I'll put in the corrections you suggested and any other needed punctuations. :)

Thank You, Lily. That means a lot! I will definetly keep writing :lol: Also your avatar is very nce :)

I really liked this. Your prologue did its job perfectly. It gave me a nice taste of the story and it was great. Can't wait for the rest of the ...